May 7

CO² Crackhouse

Category: Script Contest
Joke submitted by morgray
Country: belgium
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Occupation: student

Star and his companions are walking near the floodline when they suddenly hear a reggae-like music and a voice say: “Hey, dude, you should totally try to inhale this stuff!” As curious as they are, they sneak towards the sound of the voice. Suddenly they see hippy-like Phytoplankton, one of the worst creatures of the sea. “Hey, man, come over here.” Star and his mates enter a big shell where clean air leaves the tip. The CO² released by burning stuff is being inhaled by the phyto’s. The next screen u see the shell broken and burning. Star walks away saying: “damned phyto’s”. A phyto who lies burning inhales his own smoke and says “whoa!!!”

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8 Comments so far

  1. Sushi May 7th, 2008 10:03 am

    Not bad man , nice use of the phyto :p. I’m saving those for my next story lol. Like the way you worked it into a drug for them , that’s clever. So good luck man :D may the best story win :D.

  2. Joeri May 7th, 2008 10:12 am

    Hehehe, this really ‘cracks’ me up :)
    I have some friends from Oostduinkerke with a reggae band; “Windub” and I’m pretty sure they would help us out with a nice funky tune :)

    Great job, Morgray :)

    Joeri

  3. Robin Algoedt May 8th, 2008 9:39 am

    Nice!!!

  4. Spanker May 8th, 2008 1:00 pm

    Goot wurk man!

  5. morgray May 8th, 2008 4:32 pm

    When i read the script from sushi again, i think it would be able to merge his with mine. It wuld be double interesting!!! Anyways, thanks for the comments guys!

  6. Sushi May 8th, 2008 6:07 pm

    Yeah man that seems totally doable :p. We could easilly replace the sandcastle with the crackhouse and still blow it up :D. We should really write some stuff together , we both got some wild ideas but together it could be fantastic… But I don’t really know if that’s possible seeing as how it’s a contest :p best ask Joeri for some advise :p

  7. morgray May 8th, 2008 6:23 pm

    Let’s hope he leaves a comment in this one!

  8. Joeri May 9th, 2008 12:41 pm

    Hey guys,

    Better if you keep the current jokes separated, together the story would be too long. Both the Phyto and the funny fish called ‘Axl’ will need a decent and funny introduction, which takes time to properly tell and we only have 3 minutes :).
    But in the future you guys can combine that fountain of creativity as much as you want, I can only support that with much enthusiasm.

    As for the Tshirt, .. you’ll have to decide who gets which part :)

    I hope this helps, keep it up guys .. PLANKTON POWER! :)

    Joeri

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